tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2220882419376620486.post3042882565806944198..comments2011-10-03T13:51:21.434+08:00Comments on 2011 S2-07 English Language Blog: Newspaper Article - Darius Low and Neo Wei HongPatricia_Nghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01038578427749303616noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2220882419376620486.post-51640924406073626982011-01-26T17:10:02.068+08:002011-01-26T17:10:02.068+08:00The tone of the article is appropriate and the con...The tone of the article is appropriate and the content is objective enough. I need you to work on paragraphing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com