Thursday, June 30, 2011

Self Introduction: Sean Phua (16)

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2 comments:

  1. Things that can be improved:

    Lesser shadow gestures
    More engagement with the audience
    More creativity regarding novelty

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  2. The script can be improved in the sense that you could have planned it beforehand, as this creates unnecessary delays in the speech.About the clarity and volume it is fine and can be heard clearly.Shadow gestures can be controlled as they tend to be rather noticeable.

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